Truth and Fiction on Haiti: The Real Victim speaks was content wise a very problematic read for me. Neither am I familiar with any of these authors, nor with the magazines, so it is hard to judge the substance. However, Majorie Valbourn claims, that McClelland did not seek for the victims approval to portray her experiences. This is a legitimate critique, if it is correct. Rather low down is her statement of McClellands questionable truth about her personal experiences. She does not provide any evidence or proof of this claim, which makes it fictional as well. She criticizes McClelland on a very personal level, which seems to be out of place for me.
The Female Journalists & Researchers Respond To Haiti PTSD Article is directed to the editors, which makes their respond in contrast to Valbrun less personal already. Furthermore, their critique is to reconsider the representation, which is based on a generalization of Haiti, which McClelland presents within her article. The critiques seem to be justifiable.
Valburn is afraid that publics trust in journalism is undermined. I think if public questions articles it is just an act of enlightenment; and enlighten be the journalists aim.
In the end, it needs a recipient who questions, checks different perspectives and builds is opinion only after this process. Furthermore, this position should be dynamic.
I think Leela Fernandas concept minorization of the world, introduced in chapter 6 of Transnational Feminism in the United States, could be one way to dynamize (does this verb exist?) this process of positioning. The transnational perspective would ask you to minoritize your home country, for example the US. She describes this adding of a transnational perspective, as a simple inclusion of one more category of the other. I think it is interesting, that she chooses the word inclusion over integration though. Inclusion means to not just integrate in an existing system, but to change the system to make something actually fit. This means inherently, that not just one other is added, but that the original perspective, is overthought, and also changed.